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 </p>
 
 Find the latest deployment here: https://playwerewolf.uk.r.appspot.com/.
-I value your feedback.
 
 An application to run games of <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mafia_(party_game)">Werewolf (Mafia)</a>
-smoothly when you don't have a deck, or when you and your friends are together virtually. Inspired by my time playing
-<a href="https://boardgamegeek.com/boardgame/152242/ultimate-werewolf-deluxe-edition">Ultimate Werewolf</a> and by
-2020's quarantine. The app is free to use and anonymous. 
+smoothly when you don't have a deck, or when you and your friends are together virtually. Basically, a host builds a game and deals a role to everyone's device, and then the app keeps track of the game state (timer, player statuses, etc). 
+
+Inspired by my time playing <a href="https://boardgamegeek.com/boardgame/152242/ultimate-werewolf-deluxe-edition">Ultimate Werewolf</a> and by
+2020's quarantine. The app is free to use, anonymous, and fully open-source under the MIT license. After a long hiatus I've rewritten a lot of the code and think this version works a lot better. This was (and still is) fundamentally a learning project, so feedback or assistance is appreciated.
 
-After a long hiatus from maintaining the application, I have come back and undertaken a large-scale redesign, rewriting 
-most of the code and producing a result that I believe is more stable and has much more sensible client-server interaction.
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 ## Tech Stack
 
 This is a Node.js application. It is written purely using JavaScript/HTML/CSS. The main dependencies are
-<a href="https://expressjs.com/">Express.js</a> and <a href="https://socket.io/">Socket.io</a>. It is fully open-source
-and under the MIT license. This was (and still is) fundamentally a learning project, and thus I welcome collaboration 
-and feedback of any kind.
-
-All pixel art is my own, for better or for worse.
+<a href="https://expressjs.com/">Express.js</a> and <a href="https://socket.io/">Socket.io</a>.
 
 ## Contributing and Developers' Guide
 
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 to listen for changes to **server-side code** (Node.js modules) and automatically restart the server. If you do not want 
 this, run instead `npm run start:dev:no-hot-reload` or `npm run start:dev:windows:no-hot-reload`. 
 
-If you are developing as well, in a separate terminal, execute `npm run build:dev`. This uses <a href="https://webpack.js.org/">
+If you are making changes to client-side javascript, in a separate terminal, execute `npm run build:dev`. This uses <a href="https://webpack.js.org/">
 Webpack</a> to bundle javascript from the `client/src` directory and place it in the `client/dist` directory, which is ignored by Git.
 This command uses the `--watch` flag, which means the process will continue
-to run in this terminal, watching for changes to JavaScript within the `client/src` directory and re-bundling automatically. You 
+to run in this terminal, watching for changes within the `client/src` directory and re-bundling automatically. You 
 definitely want this if making frequent JavaScript changes to client-side source code. Any other changes, such as to HTML or CSS
 files, are not bundled, and thus your changes will be picked up simply by refreshing the browser.